Review with Mantic Game Client
On Thursday 13th of March , If you had a high enough attendance , you were given a review with our client of this project 'Mantic Games' and recieve feedback on the designs that we have create for our Factions.
The Pitch I created for the Review
Rundown of Review
During the Review , I started of with the Base idea for the game between the 2 different factions , discussing the designs and thumbnails I went with for the 2 factions and talks about the backstory of my Creatures and their backstories which was difficult to try and explain in detail whilst sticking towards the 10 minute time limit we were given
Feedback for each Character Design
After I showcased my idea , I was given feedback after answering different questions given to me by the client for what should be altered on my Creature Designs.
Space Bugs :
- With how the claw mechanic functioned , lower the bottom claw to make the mechanic of how the creature would claw into the walls and surrounds make more of a practical sense.
- Either Add an additional set of legs or rotate and shift the legs so they are closer together.
FireFight Plague
- The Plague Skin Tone is different based on Environment and What U believed was Ice is Bones so change the ice texture to more of a bone colour scheme
- The Plague has the Muscles tearing through the skin which doesn't seem to be as noticeable here in the design , alter so it has exposed muscle tissue exposed.
After taking this feedback , I will work towards them and compare them to my orginal final designs! The Meeting was actually a really nice addition and helped me figure out certain pieces of the work I was a little unsure with.










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